AshtonNextGen's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[LM.C Little Fat Man Boy]

I love LM.C!

But this flash really needs to be compressed, the file size is way to large for something this plain, not that im being critical of your artwork, but to be fair, the video size alone doesn't even need to be this big!

EaterofOrphans responds:

I would fix this if i knew how XD, I even went as far as trying a compression program, yet that only took it down to 13.5mb

as for being plain, ive never done a flash this long before, so I let my quality drop a bit... i have better shorts on my dev art, but I feel that they are a little too short for NG, although Im thinking I should collab them up at the end of the year XD

[RE-UNdead ep.3]

No Im sorry!

I know what you was trying to do "creating a budget cut scenario" but it would have been a lot better if you had just chosen one poorly anomated look and stuck with it, the fact that you kept changing animation styles made it really hard to follow, and people who haven't seen the previous episodes will be put off by viewing this.
You should try your best in every episode so newcomers wont ever be put off! =)
(sorry for being critical but its true!)

Khris responds:

thanks for the feed back, and don't be sorry about being critical, i need all the feed back i can get to make RE-UNdead better

[The Baby :3]

Awesome!

Your such a brilliant animator man, everything you make is just so smooth and fluid, how long have you spent now animating? =D

itsjms responds:

:D not to long, mostly make games and graphics <3

[Super sonics evil day out]

No offence but that was pretty sucky!

It had a good story structure an all, but bthe animation was really terrible!
you need to measure up your characters before you render, and mesure up the proportions of your environment as well, I noticed that whenever super sonic curled into a ball he was 2/3rds of his original size, which was too big for the environment anyway! Plus whenever super sonic would travel long distances he would just be traveling across the screen on a loop, maybe if you extended the stage so the stage would move instead of the character it would actually create the effect that super sonic is actually flying, not just moving across the same area over and over again!

but above all the animation needs a lot of work!
don't worry, you'll get there! =)

GREATROBUMAS responds:

no offence taken and thanks for the advice ill see what i can do and again thanks

[Untitled Prologue]

Pretty cool espressions!

heh, I must admit, hard as I wanted to resist, it was pretty funny actally, especially those mario drones, and the ghost of king Henry!
Oh and the queen drinking tea, that was the shit! =P

Tanzeppelin215 responds:

If you liked the flashback segments you should see my original Hamlet vids. Thats where those scenes came from.

[Inside the mind of SBC]

How do you create those effects?

Your a genious man! =D
Was that your voice narrating the intro btw?

BlueHippo responds:

why, yes it was ;P

[Sonic charas sing for you]

Cool!

There isn't anything wrong with this flash, it seems to work fine for me, I think the only thing you could do to improve is maybe add a background but apart from that its fine for submission! =)

kalmathehedgehog responds:

Really? Doesn't the music go too fast for the images? That's the problem I have when I see it in my computer, and it pretty drestroys all the effort I put in this xD