AshtonNextGen's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Gallery]

Nifty little flash gallery =)

Even though it wasn't much, that was a pretty cool idea, the way you used art gallery frames to display the pictures in the menu, and its great you included 'No Eyes Guy' as well, I love that pic! =D
Best of luck Jonah, and hope this gets though!

Jonah-The-Tiger responds:

=D Thank you for the review
Glad you liked it =]

[DrawIT]

I really wanna get into this!

This seems like a brilliant idea (I admit I didn't have time to play it properly so I have no right to critise) But I wanna spend some more time on this and see how far I get! =D

[Sonic Quiz 1]

Its a clever idea but...

I have to give you a low review rating, half those questions were wrong and some were impossible to guess, for instance you said there were 7 stages in the orignal sonci the hedgehog but there are actually 6!
Green hill zone, marble zone, spring yard zone, labyrinth zone, star light zone and scrap brain zone!
And the hidden stage in sonic 2 beta is called the Hidden Palace Zone, I know this fora fact because I have several sonic 2 betas/deltas, sorry I realy don't know what answer you had in mind but you really should have done more reseach before you made this quiz.

And as for the Dr. Ivo Robotnik question, there are several different fan bases and media around the world that each suggest that he has his own personal 'lackey', and it was impossible from that image to tell whether you was reffering to Satam/archie comics, sonic underground cartoon series or the UK fleetway sonic the comic series.
Because the answer could have been either Snivley, Grimer, Sleet and Dingo, judging from the artwork in that screenshot, You relly should have made that question more clear!

Keep trying though, maybe with improvements your next quiz will be better! =)

Yoruichi responds:

yes I will improve, just so you know the answer was Commander Brutus.

I counted Final Zone in the total.

Maybe you misunderstood the Hidden Palace question as the answer was Sonic 2.

[Play Pet]

Thats prettu good for your first flash! =)

Aww it was cute, and I loved the music playing in the background, I must admit your first attempt at submitting a flash was a lot better than mine, and I love your animation style as well!
Hope to see more work from you in the future, Jonah!
<//-^>

Jonah-The-Tiger responds:

Thank you Very much for the nice review =]
I am Currently working on the second Version of this which is shaping out much better so far, if u have Any suggestions for mini Games or anything else you'd like to see then please Pm With it

thank you

[Sonic Sky Chase Zone]

lol Funny how you made this from sprites taken

...from the sonic screensaver! =)
As for the game, I like the idea but its genually flawed!
I mean, as for starters Sonic and Tails are Way too big, giving you the impression that it would be difficult to avoid enemies, but that shouldn't matter as the game runs so slowly its not hard to avoid them anyway!

My suggestions for improvement would be mainly to make the charatacers smaller to give the impression that the stage is actually bigger than it looks and definatly make the gameplay a lot faster, or at least enhance the graphics to make it appear faster (fast moving clouds maybe?) This is a must because I don't think a single person here is willing to sit though the entire game to be honest, not at those speeds! =(

Plus if you design the sprite graphics from scratch yourself you will get more praise for it, thats what I would do anyway? =)

[Beef Bash]

Fuck Me That was Good!

I have never played such an addicting flash game before in my life!
Honestly, no way in hell did I expect this game to be so good!
Im gonna play on it all the time!
Congrats on making the best game this easter man! =D

[Monkey Poo Fight]

Dude that was Gross!

...But insanely addictive at the same time!
Well done =D

[DK Mine Madness]

Hairy Greased Up Buff Chest Coal Digger

Like, whats not to like? =P
OMG If only that cart was big enough for the both of us, we could just totally jump around in that all day! Pshyeah!
(And omg if only that coal digger was Scotty Vanity, I could just faint right now!)
- XXXXXXXX (call me)

[Boys vs. Girls]

Awesome!

I love how the game is different for both genders and has not only a different theme but different games and difficulty that appeals to both!
Its definatly a great game that deserves applause!
Hope this goes far!

[Girl Dress Up]

OMG I love it!

If only there was more space to place the unwanted clothes, most dress up games have this problem!
I'd give you a high ranking but the only problem I encountered was that, when you try to put her shoes over her stockings, clicking away means that her stockings go over her shoes? sound familiar? =/

lemag responds:

when you add clothes to the model the last piece of cloth you add will be above all. if you want it to be underneath another one you will have to press the items you want to be above. so if you want the stocking to be under the show you will either put the stocking and then the shoes or if you placed the shoes first you will have to drag them a little after you have placed the stockings. this way the highlighted object will be the shoes and they will be placed above all clothing items.

not sure I answered your issue. I'm kind of mixed up myself trying to answer this :)